Your argument is not nearly convincing enough to persuade me to give you my vote. It lacks content, and I feel that lack of necessary information will dissuade anyone for seriously considering in voting for you when there are so many great and qualified candidates.
I do appreciate your courage to run, though. I wish you the best of luck in the future, and admire your braveness to put yourself out there.
Your speech lacks plenty of detail and effort, the plans are vague and tempt many questions. I’d suggest gaining more experience in Firestone Government before running for such a high up position. I wish you the best of luck with your campaign.
your speech sounds like you want to be a DPS investigator and this is really just a list of your past experiences and you didn’t actually describe your plans